Right off the bat one point that really grabbed my attention was the fact that it says a thesis evolves as the paper goes on. I had never really thought of it like this before cause I kind of always just thought you write a paper then go back, see what it is about and make up a thesis. In reality however, you should have an idea of what your paper is going to revolve around when you start and then make a thesis and you can build off of it as you go. Another thing that stuck out to me is the fact that they say that you should not be too repetitive saying something was in the thesis. The main reason this stuck out to me is just because i think i do that a lot.  I think my writing is pretty similar to his but I could defiantly take some pointers from him.