Making a Thesis Evolve

This reading helped me realize about the actual thought and effort that is really needed to complete a good paper. One of the key things to do when writing the thesis is to question what you are writing and see if the debatable thesis statement actually covers it. If it doesn't then the thesis is too broad and generic and not going to get the point of the paper across as well as you could. One of the biggest differences I saw between that of my writing and the writing done in the packet was that the thesis was very broad and generic, unlike mine which was directed at one topic in particular. Also I feel that the concluding paragraph was somewhat weak and I can relate to that almost every time I write a paper, its always the hardest part.