Wednesday, August 24, 2011

The death of the Moth

I thought it was an interesting story, but kinda boring to read. It seems to me like the author was pretty bored and lonley to notice something that unique. I did however like the fact that the moth kept fighting to try and make it and get up on that corner.  Was that like a morning ritual for that thing? it seemed to me like it was going in a distinct pattern. Do all moths do that?

2 comments:

  1. I actually found the story very interesting just because of the depth she could go into about such a seemingly minuscule thing. However i see how it could be found boring but i think next time if you really look into it more you can get more out of it.

    -waterboy

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  2. An interesting idea... morning ritual. Honestly, I think that the moth was "out of place," but I love the way you are thinking out of the box here. I do have a question for you though. Why would sitting still and noticing the world around make her bored or lonely? Isn't that was artists do? Also, I love your honesty about this story. haha Nice post. Keep it up. -teachy teach

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